Story-telling Unit: Project update

Well thats the 2nd draft of the script for 'The Meeting' complete! I think i'll leave it for a few days now and take another look at it on Sunday before i hand it in on Monday. But here is the 1st draft with some of the edits i made on it to work on for when i did the 2nd draft.

        

        

        

        

        

        

Not bad for a 1st draft but i think with the improvements i've made its much better. Hopefully after i get feedback on it from Simon i can really take it onboard and create something really good.

Stay Safe,

Helen