After my 2nd tutorial with Simon I spoke to him about the ending of the script. In his feedback he had suggested that the ending needed work so I spoke to him about my ideas to change the ending to include a confrontation with the gang and have Leah be able to stand up for her friend. I think it will definitely mean there is more to learn from the story.
Here is the new version of the script with the new changes.
The Meeting Draft 3
Stay safe,
Helen
No comments:
Post a Comment